Sunday in the park with George

First I told him that it would be better to rearrange that sentence. Describe a random, positive encounter with a stranger that stuck out to you. Then I would remove the redundancy of ‘that stuck out to you’ after all you do remember it.

Then he struck me and I stabbed him. It was a great day in the park.

The only person who meets me in the park now is that chick with a chainsaw. It’s nice to have a friend.